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A Colouring of [link] - and a redesign of [link]

Naomi Obiano is always focused, and is one of the most competitive pilots on the grid, on and off the circuit. She shares an intense rivalry with Sugimoto Yakama, formed when the two raced neck and neck in his first grand prix.

Naomi Obiano is owned and drawn by me.

Feedback is greatly appreciated, preferably critique :). Thanks in advance.

Critiques


:iconmorning-star1:
This piece of work shows a stunning improvement from the artist! The skin tones are very realistic and almost 3D and it works really well with the style and tones of the piece. The glasses are particularly attractive with their futuristic style and attention to detail.
The background is neat and effective and leaves the woman the center of attention. The artist has improved greatly on his hair technique though I feel the bulk of the hair should have a few more lose strands and partings to fit in more with the style of sides and bottom of the hair. Overall a very original and nicely designed piece.
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:iconkakaheishi:
SO AMAZING MATE :]

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:iconlight88:
*Looks at the original*

Dang nice improvement man. Great job ^_^

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Hyperness, add in some insanity and you get how I am on a daily basis :P
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:iconhalibeluser:
Great improvement ^^ i love it

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:iconrql:
Thanks man! I can only wonder if i try this again in a years time, what it would look like. Thanks for the continued support, i apreciate it ^_^

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"The aim of life is self-development. To realize one's nature perfectly - that is what each of us is here for. " - Oscar Wilde

Help me by checking out my Gallery and leave feedback/ Critique, i would apreciate it :). - [link]
:iconangelgalael:
Improving nicely Luke.^^ I love how you colored her glasses and the natural-looking colors of her skin. The skin-lighting is good also. And as usual.. I'll only say one word; hair. You know my opinion on it by now, but the picture really does look lovely overall.

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:iconlight88:
Well they say one improves with time and uh...(Rams head..)..oh yes practice xD

Can't wait to see more of your work man :D

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Hyperness, add in some insanity and you get how I am on a daily basis :P
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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior.
:iconphantomgirl424:
Oooo very nice coloring! ^^

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:iconrql:
Thanks! I am GLAD that you think so! :iconfalconyesplz:

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"The aim of life is self-development. To realize one's nature perfectly - that is what each of us is here for. " - Oscar Wilde

Help me by checking out my Gallery and leave feedback/ Critique, i would apreciate it :). - [link]
:iconrql:
And practice i shall! :D

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"The aim of life is self-development. To realize one's nature perfectly - that is what each of us is here for. " - Oscar Wilde

Help me by checking out my Gallery and leave feedback/ Critique, i would apreciate it :). - [link]

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